Shit on the Front Page v2

Discussion in 'DeviantART' started by Bogus Journey, Aug 2, 2011.

  1. Bogus Journey

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    A continuation from the previous topic, as it has reached its page limit.
    The sole purpose is to post awful deviations from the "most popular" section.

    I'll start the dice rolling with this unfunny comic from *humon
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  2. TheForRealDeal

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    Dude's face seriously bugs me
    How do I slant

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    They say "showing how cruel the world is"
    I say "white emo kid"

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    It's animated, so it's not a screencap, OKAY

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    TnA is art

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    The girl isn't so bad despite being an animu titty creature, just give her a bit more flesh, but those background elements are just zero effort

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    This coloring is atrocious

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    We've already had this argument but seriously, those faces Are you gonna cry now, Lurkerella

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    The lineart for this was already on the frontpage, and it hasn't really gotten any better

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    I don't even need to explain this
     
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    Probably is not funny because we don't know what the hell is about or who are those characters and such?

    Anyway, the layout is pretty clean but the first panels needs to be separated a bit more... Also I had a hard time reading the last one since the speech bubbles were a bit off.

    I made a trip to Humon's old comics and... Fuck sake, they may not be currently the best comics out there but the first ones where pretty shitty: Terrible artwork, terrible colouring, cliché body language Tom Preston style and fucking comic sans:

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    The fact that she actually works on her stuff and improves is the reason why I can't dislike Humon.
     
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    The bitches and whores are popular for obvious reasons. Am I the only one that lol'd at the vehicle in the depth of field? Maybe it wasn't stationary.
     
  5. Lurkerella

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    1.- The cranium is too flat, I think it's a case of artist trying to make two character interact but drew them separately for the most part.

    2.- The only issue I see with the cosplay is that Stocking needs to brush that wig. The scenery isn't exactly bad but it doesn't fit the episode they are cosplaying at all.

    2.- Overall is still good, and if case you didn't notice everything starts to blur the farthest it gets from the face which is the centre of attention of the whole picture so I don't see the problem with that part being the most worked over. If he was lazy to make a background he covered that fact nicely with a out-of-focus effect.

    4.- Why I would cry?
     
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    http://comipa.deviantart.com/art/Stocking-246099348
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    Now THIS is a good example of abuse of out-of-focus effect. What the fuck is wrong with her body? Specially her scary hips, torso and and wrist.

    The artist actually admits she messed it up completely, it's not a out-of-focus effect but just unfinished and shitty but people is still going "OH SO PRETTY" because the effect is working...
     
  7. TheForRealDeal

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    I didn't notice because the concept is the stupidest thing
     
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    Is not like you need more than 4 seconds.
     
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    And here comes the crying again

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    This is absolutely amazing
     
  10. Lurkerella

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    The sad thing about this is that the only part that looks good, which is the credits, is because it was copied from the standar layout used in movies.

    The watermark is also sad because I doubt someone will bother to steal this shit.

    Can it get sadder?
     
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    Are they inside of a giant cardboard box with trash in it? Hammer & FAIL indeed.

    ...Dat butt chin.
     
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    the other thread, but...

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    Damn, if you read the comments , a shitload of his followers say they would buy this on a shirt. He has the dumbest fans ever. If I see anyone wearing that out, I wouldn't be like "cool shirt bro", I would be like...that guy is a fuck.
     
  13. TheForRealDeal

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    I still say that's fucking offensive

    Also fix your imagelink dude
     
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    Yes:
    So do people pay for these things.
     
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    After seeing all the shit the front page has to offer, and being introduced to this thread, I felt inclined to contribute.

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    Not only is it a furry, and a suggestive one at that, but the boobs look wonky, the right leg looks like its rubber, the left forearm looks a tad too short, even from the perspective from which it should be from, the sparkles in the air are just way too much, the dock isn't even supported by anything, ect ect.
     
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    Why is she covered in shiny semen

    Oh yeah, that partially visible vulva is all class
    That coloring is terrible, too
     
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    [​IMG]

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    I find it funny that it's under the Glamour Portraits section. What?
     
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    OH WOW. VERSION 2 OF ONE OF THE WORST SHITPOST THREADS ON THE FORUMS. YOU'RE ALL A BUNCH OF NO LIFE FAGGOTS WHO CANT DRAW, AND YOURE NO BETTER THAN THE NO LIFE FAGGOTS WHO CAN/CANT DRAW THAT YOURE MAKING FUN OF. EVERYONE OF YOU FAGGOTS THAT HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO DO THEN HIT F5 ON WHATEVER PAGE YOURE COPYING THIS SHIT OFF OF ALL DAY SHOULD ANHERO NOW AND MAKE THIS FORUM A LITTLE BIT LESS OF A SHITHOLE.
     
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  21. Synthia

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    ^ A+.
     
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    Shit, dude, lay of the roids.
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    Fuck's sake, everything from the shoulders up is good, but judging by her posture she should (A) Be in horrible pain from the way those legs are bent and (B) Have collapsed because of the TINY SPINDLY LEGS. Also the whole thing looks flat as fuck, Jesus.
     
  23. TheForRealDeal

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    Good old animu fucked up feet pose
    The shoes are copypaste, at that
     
  24. Patetisk

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    The anatomy of the arms is off, they're the same length as the entire leg (to the bottom of the shoe)
     
  25. Synthia

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    If that's a top she needs to work on the folds. It looks like she just copied some x-rays on to the shirt. And you can actually do that pose but there needs to be a shift on weight for it to work.
     
  26. TheForRealDeal

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    That doesn't make it any less dumb looking and overdone
     
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    Giant-ass image

    What are sketchbook pages doing on the front page? I understand you can find cool stuff in there, but come on, is it really that hard to build on it in a new, finished piece?
     
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    PROTIP: You can make anything stupid by saying it childishly.

    For example: OMG IM BEING SO TTLY EDGY REPLYING TO THIS THREAD AND MAKING THEM LOOK LIKE RETARDS OMG!!!!11!!!! I TTLY WONT LUK LIKE A WHINY SHIT!!!11!!!!

    Returning to the topic at hand
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    I swear that fucking thing is going to haunt my nightmares now.

    I've seen it too much.

    Also the old man's head looks like it's been detatched.
     
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    TITS? I WANTED BIG NIGGER DICKS! THIS PIECE TOTALLY BLOWS LOLOLOLOL

    but seriously, we need to put a little more explanation behind what we post here. And be funnier about it.
     
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