Think we've got all the bases covered http://ndunsmo.deviantart.com/ I really want some feedback here Wed Jul 13, 2011, 12:29 PM Remember how I posted a sample from my new script I was working on? (Better yet, how many of you actually read that entry?) Well, I finished it last night and I'd love for anyone interested to read it and tell me what he/she thinks. [link] This will most likely take over an hour to read, though, since it is supposed to be movie length, so it might be a good idea to read it in doses if you feel you must. An excerpt: The two flee for their lives as the machine opens up, releasing a large torrent of flames, hitting the school as it starts to burn, kids and teachers fleeing for their lives from the building, news reporters, fire fighters and police officers pulling up in seconds. Reporter: [Standing in front of the burning building holding a microphone] Hello, I am Amanda Davidson, and I am standing right in front of Garrett High School, which has been burned by a strange machine that resembles a fridge for some reason. Probably some vandal's idea of a joke. Principal: [Rushes in front of the camera] WELL, I DON'T THINK THIS IS SO FUNNY!!!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH IT'S GOING TO COST TO REPAIR THIS SCHOOL!!!!?? I AM GOING TO MURDER THE CULPRIT WHEN I CATCH HIM!!!!!! Riveting.