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    Looks better than anything you ever pooped out, you autistic niggerfaggot.
     
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    This plot certainly neck twisting

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    Gren doesn't seem particularly alarmed.
    Also Kessah, everybody knows that in situations like this, if someone tells ya to jump, you jump first and ask questions later. If Joseco was a decent writer, he could capitalize on that detail and maybe have a character arc about Kessah actually learning to work well with others. She's lived alone for much of her life, after all, and it's implied that her sister was maybe a bit of a loner. Learn from her sister's mistakes and all that, yada yada. It'd be something at least.
     
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    I swear if that geraffa-goat shit starts talking and makes 'friends' with them or some shit...
     
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    Why attack it? Just a moment ago they seemed pretty convinced they couldn't even take the thing on in a fight. Why not just move on to the next, much easier to defeat llama? It doesn't seem interested in them, does it really matter how the monsters are killed, so long as they're killed? As for the matter of scavenging the corpse for useful bits, they can just wait until the monsters leave to do that.
     
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    Ignoring the fact that nothing has really happened before, in the pacing of this mission it seems pretty early to be upping the ante so soon, to go from a basic training mission to holy shit a boss monster is already fucking with us day one. Like maybe do one or two more missions, get the team confident, maybe overconfident, escalated conflict between them, character development (What's that?) and have something go terribly wrong on a different mission due to incompetence+overconfidence+boss monster, setting up something I'd call a meaningful death. Maybe even have them run (even from this current fight) only to be dogged by the same monster (if it didn't look like shit) later. It might even have an impact on Kessah (probably not)
     
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    "Lord Motherfucker, give me strength!"
     
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    lol that mouth looks like that cargo walker that ripley used in aliens.
     
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    The sales for this comic are going to be absolutely dismal.
     
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    WTF even constitute as a graphic novel event?
     
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    soooo my guess is....2021 till volume 2????
     
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    why pay for it if everything is right there on his fucking blog for free?

    who is this for? who is the target audience for this thing? People who've already read it and just cant wait to read all that fucking nothing again but want to have a physical manifestation of that disappointment?
     
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    It's to support his ongoing "masterpiece"
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    I swear to God, if it sinks back into the ground from whence it came...
     
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    They're a lot bigger than was originally implied, it seems
     
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    Surprise, your sister's not really dead!!!!!

    If that actually happens though I'm going to give up on life.
     
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    It'll be Adrien or some shit.
     
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    Maybe it'll be the other wolf guy getting all mad that they're hunting his 'pets' or something, and then he'll go on this spiel about how Mary Sue needs to join his clan otherwise she's hurting poor, innocent animals with feelings of their own.

    ...I'm reaching/thinking too much about this.
     
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    Actually someone unimportant probably got grabbed/killed now that I think about it. Because its time for Kessah to Mary Sue it up.
     
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    "I am the llama of lord mother and I have seen your plight my child *Spits violently at entire team* Your sister has told me about my goat brethren and I shall fight until...." Gets shot in the head.
     
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    I came back and she's fighting a Penis.
    I guess it's better than coming back and nothing having happened again.
     
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    Religious dude either about to get got, or Kessah's gonna pull some shit out of her ass to save the day.
    What kind of moron just stands in front of the monster instead of picking up their comrade and going to carry them to safety? Probably the same type of moron who actually expects the wrath of a goddess to strike down whenever the fuck they need it, instead of pragmatically trying to help themselves.
    Literally these people can't think to do anything useful? They could even just cause a distraction by attacking another one of the injured llamas, that's what brought the super-llama out in the first place.
     
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    3 whole panels dedicated to people shouting things
     
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    Why is it just standing there? Wasn't it suppose to be moving really fast?
     
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    Their reactions seem kind of delayed. Like..they waited through all of that ye old jibberjabber to be all "DURRRR...FUCK."

    I wonder if Joseco is circumcised. That monster gives off a sort of deep underlying hatred for uncut dicks.

    Who wants to bet it spews thick, white acid drool.
     
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    Are you writing the fanfic yet?
     
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    I'm terrible at writing. Though..couldn't be worse than his shit.
     
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    Don't move, It's sight is based on motion.
     
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