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    Really, repeating BAAH become as annoying as Lord Mother.
     
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    ALL THESE FUCKING IGNORAMUS


    I TOLD YOU, I WILL CONTINUE NECROBUMPING UNTIL THIS THREAD IS DELETED.
     
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    At least we'll be ensured to get noticifations and never forget about this thread.
     
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    It's even stupider than I would've imagined.
     
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    After that buildup on the previous page I thought it would've been a bit bigger than that.
     
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    Now that one has to be of the "black" variety with that size
     
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    What is this attack on titan edgy shit
     
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    Ok....where did it 'rise up' from? The way he had it laid out in the field there was no where that alpaca-condom wrapper could have been hidden.

    And when they bleat in fear, their eyes bleed????
     
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    BAAAA-KRAAAAK!!!
     
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     “Very well,” he replied. They added these two, long life and good fortune to the others. Then they began to sing. They sang twelve and then put two songs on top, making fourteen. By that time, day was breaking and grasshoppers began to sing. A woman’s song was heard and when it was finished someone put a head in and said, “Why didn’t you invite us?” “Your fee will provided,” First Man replied. They found it was Dawn who had done this. Then they began to sing.
     
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    The flow of the action between panels really suck.
     
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    The design is so awful and doesn't make sense.
    First of all, they don't resemble goats in any way. The exposed part of the skull isn't even close to any animal and the teeth especially don't seem like they'd be much use unless their diet is similar to humans' specifically.
    Why hasn't he used any of the more recognizable features of goats in his design if he can't even try to get the body shape right? It's a cliche to put emphasis on goats' horns, but it's a cliche because it works fairly well. Same with goats' eyes, even if they're not as excessively used symbols and so.
    What's the purpose of those flaps on their neck? Are the things on the male's head supposed to be horns?
    Why doesn't this mutation seem to have any drawbacks?

    I'm so worked up by this that I started sketching my own version of foreskin llama.
     
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    My God its head is so big, how does it not just flop all over the place, completely top-heavy? I'd have thought that with a head that large, its body would be tremendous, and would just hilariously continue to rise up out of the ground from nowhere. But nope. Instead we just get this absolute mess of anatomy.
     
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    Why did she shoot it in the side instead of the kneecaps like she did with the others? Those shots brought them down REAL fucking quick
     
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    I feel like making a redraw of this fucking thing... You want mutated goats, Ill give you mutated goats.
     
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    The dialogue needs a Hemingway style edit. It includes way too much that is shown or can be shown.
     
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    I'd actually be interested in other people's versions of these if anyone's up for it.
    I drew my version of them just a few hours ago but I ended up getting more concerned about how their bodies would work and so forth to actually develop the design further.

    I'm not that skilled nor experienced with creature designs so far (I've experimented mainly with humanoid species' designs and otherwise only helped friends + random people with fixing their creature designs to make them more "logical"/fitting to their world's lore).
    So I didn't add anything, just modified them - actually goat-like anatomy, still with long legs, and turned the exposed part of skull into some hybrid of goat and crocodile (for the length) skull. Gave them overgrown hooves (and horns for males), like goats can actually have them but with these I'd make it common and exaggerated - some mutation accelerating their growth way more so that it can become significantly problematic or even lethal.
    I'm trying to figure how to make the loose skin actually work (if I can even do that) and what sort of teeth would work for them - sharp, uneven molars similar to crocodile teeth would look interesting imo but they'd need to be modified a lot since herbivores need to chew their food. Front teeth will just be like they're with goats. And since they don't have cheeks or lips and so forth, that would affect their behavior and possibly the way they vocalize.
    JJ has established the world and lore poorly so I might be overly strict due to lack of info.

    I might be over doing this but I actually enjoy working on species, creatures and designs in this way.
     
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    I got rid of the goat idea for now. Its obvious hes going for llamas or alpacas for the look stupid llama. stupid llama.
     
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    Here's my own rough take on a mutated demon goat. Wanted to keep it simple.
    demon goat suggestion.
     
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    Ignoring the shit about the design since there's not much else to say, the last two panels bug me because you see her shooting from one angle going right, then the perspective changes. They could have flipped the image or drawn it from the rear of the 'goat' to have the bullets on the left side. I just think it messes with the flow and looks weird
     
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    It looks like a Wendigo that went too far on the whole bestial transformation gig and never regained human shape.
     
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    Why would you not shoot at its legs or neck or head? Isn't she their captain? What kind of ninny hunter fires two shots and then stops and panics when that doesn't immediately bring the animal down?
     
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    Cuz Dramaz.We needs dem.

    And also, why didnt he put a scene that shows some distance between the fighters and they retarded goats? Ive been assuming that they were at least in the same vicinity and would know that demon goat was coming...

    Ugh I give up on this comic.
     
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    The first panel is stiff as fuck. Going by the dialog the alpha goat thing is charging at them, but it looks like it's just pointing. The fourth panel is even derpier. That large ass goat looks less like a scary demon goat thing and more of a cute chihuahua.
     
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    Why dont they have some kind of comms system like radios? Seems pretty useful when you're in this big desolate area.

    And don't tell me they don't have the technology when they have fucking airships n shit
     
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    Ill call it the horny giraffe.
     
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