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  1. FuanasEdan

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    Jeebus on a dipstick! What is this a guild or a GI JOE compound? So far nothing has define the things in the world!
     
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    Nah, this is where she gets tossed in with everyone else and a bunch of people are totally going to pick on her and stuff until she proves her worth or something. It's bound to be full of conflict and interpersonal turmoil as she tries to fit in and make friends

    and then something with Adrien
     
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    The next chapter is basically gonna be G I Jane with furries
     
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    Way to fill up space on your page with a pointless near-full body shot of your main character, whom anybody who's read this comic up to this point is already very familiar with, and who's wearing totally boring and generic clothes. It's not like you could've used that space to get the ball rolling already on her training.
     
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    You'll eat your words once you see the epic introduction of the sensei.
     
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    Yeah, and that's gonna require the full fucking page for that one shot
     
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    well...he did a full page once she was going TO SLEEP and remembered she wasn't tired :confused:... He has no idea how to frame action/still shots
     
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    Oh jesus fucking christ not another pointless chitchat chapter
     
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    is this rape? whats jumping bones?

    whats with bolding random words?
     
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    Well that escalated quickly.
    I mean they were whisper- I mean murmuring something. The way it was drawn implies that she didn't hear what they were saying and that she just guessed they were talking about fucking her?
    Could have just written what they were saying in a word bubble like this to make her seem like less of a conceited cunt.
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    pointless murmurmurmur chapter
     
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    Why would they want her to jump their bones? Why do they want to be raped?
    I feel like this might be a case of Joseco using a phrase he's heard thrown around, without fully understanding what that phrase means and what it implies. He probably thinks it just means "have sex with" or something.
    Either that, or those guys have a bit of a bizarre fetish.

    Previously when the topic of sex was mentioned, Kessah was shown to get remarkably flustered. I'm surprised that she has such a straight face now. Is this perhaps meant to be some sort of not-entirely-subtle hint towards the idea that she only gets flustered when it involves Adrien?
     
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    And already kessah assumes everyone wants to fuck her.
     
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    Even if they do, why would they? Kessah is so boring, average, hardly noticeable, and suddenly, after everyone having been either suspicious of her (and thus aggressive) or overly friendly to her a bunch of guys just want to fuck her?
    If her sister had been a huge slut in addition to other things, that'd explain something (and she'd actually be more interesting that way) but now it seems like JJ either is trying to show that Kessah is speshul or this is just a pathetic "did I mention that this comic is for MATURE audiences! I almost said SEX!"
     
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    raep scene would help tbh
     
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    I'd like to know too
     
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    I still can't get over how fucking long it's been taking to get this far in the story. And it has nothing to do with the fact that he's updating tai-weekly- wait, triweekly?? TRI-WEEKLY!? Jesus christ that is even more inexcusable now. I have seen webcomics that have updated less frequently than that and they have managed to make more actual progress than HoS.

    Jesus fucking tit christ, we're at 290+ pages and we're JUST getting to the part where Kesha has started her training. Just to put it in perspective, the Watchmen comic in it's entirety was around 400+ pages long. Meanwhile we're almost 300 pages in and for all intents and purposes the story is just starting. Pisses me off how slow this is all going. Imagine if this comic was printed and bound in a book, and then imagine how disinterested you would be as you skim through all the pages of nothing.

    JJ is either stalling for time or has no idea how to remove the clutter while keeping the main plot moving.
     
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    That was not a "bite" that was a "bark," physical and verbal difference. She hasn't done anything. She has not demonstrated that she has a "bite," by killing anything or kicking anything's ass.
     
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    What the fuck is going on with her ears in that 3rd panel. Did Joseco forget to erase the panel borders overlapping them?
     
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    Not like that panel border is particularly good or anything. Really, for a yell- and assuming this is supposed to be a 'powerful moment' for Kessah as she tries to be 'her own person'- it's really muted. Especially for this manga-esque style, you'd expect something with more harsh straight lines, something more eye catching and bold.
     
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    I skimmed the first page and jumped to this one and all I can say is; Furry MegaTokyo.
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    For a second, I thought that guy's thoughts were some sort of narration or part of Kessah's monologue. And I was quite thrown by her language.
    This guy must be a really shitty sword master, considering the number of scars concentrated around his neck and face. You'd think a better sword master would have more scars on their arms and hands(though, the best sword master wouldn't have any scars at all).
     
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    To be fair, fighting monsters might result in getting a few scars regardless of how good you are, so I'd give him the benefit of the doubt.
     
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    something about how he looks just doesn't sit quite right with me, but I cannot tell what it is..
     
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    Besides the head and tail, he doesn't look reptilian at all. He has the same body as the background human guy in the mid right panel. Also the scar on his snout is weird.
     
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    Like it was completely cut off and sewn back on or something.
     
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    This is nitpicking but it bothers me that his eyes are small and on the sides when he's supposed to be a humanoid and a fighter.
     
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    Couldn't expect Joseco to design character right when his worldbuilding doesn't know where it want to be (half baked FF wannabee).

    First panel, his thighs are so tights. Compared to how he stand in the second panel.

    Anyhoo, going to watch Kingsglaive...
     
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