1. Email server is down and i have to manually confirm accounts at the moment. Check forum regularly to see if your account has been approved, you wont get an email. Sorry about the wait
    Dismiss Notice

JohnJoseco

Discussion in 'DeviantART' started by HomsarSumo, Nov 30, 2013.

Encyclopedia Dramatica Forums
Encyclopedia Dramatica Forums

Encyclopedia Dramatica is being sued by a very wealthy serial litigator. This is not just another "gimme shekels for server" - the future of ED is at stake. We are asking for donations to fund our legal battle, all money raised goes entirely towards attorney fees. Please help with whatever you can, every donation is deeply appreciated.

Donate to the Encyclopedia Dramatica Legal FundJoin the Discussion Thread

  1. Dinkbot

    Dinkbot
    Expand Collapse
    Pornograführer

    Joined:
    Feb 1, 2012
    Messages:
    4,269
    [​IMG]
     
  2. Whippet

    Whippet
    Expand Collapse
    Dramacrat

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2016
    Messages:
    442
     “Very well,” he replied. They added these two, long life and good fortune to the others. Then they began to sing. They sang twelve and then put two songs on top, making fourteen. By that time, day was breaking and grasshoppers began to sing. A woman’s song was heard and when it was finished someone put a head in and said, “Why didn’t you invite us?” “Your fee will provided,” First Man replied. They found it was Dawn who had done this. Then they began to sing.
     
    • Shit Post Shit Post x 1
    • Autism Autism x 1
    • List
  3. FuanasEdan

    FuanasEdan
    Expand Collapse
    Girlvinyl

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2012
    Messages:
    2,359
    Occupation:
    Middle of something
    [​IMG]

    The flow of the action between panels really suck.
     
  4. jerk

    jerk
    Expand Collapse
    has no title

    Joined:
    Sep 29, 2014
    Messages:
    2,079
    The design is so awful and doesn't make sense.
    First of all, they don't resemble goats in any way. The exposed part of the skull isn't even close to any animal and the teeth especially don't seem like they'd be much use unless their diet is similar to humans' specifically.
    Why hasn't he used any of the more recognizable features of goats in his design if he can't even try to get the body shape right? It's a cliche to put emphasis on goats' horns, but it's a cliche because it works fairly well. Same with goats' eyes, even if they're not as excessively used symbols and so.
    What's the purpose of those flaps on their neck? Are the things on the male's head supposed to be horns?
    Why doesn't this mutation seem to have any drawbacks?

    I'm so worked up by this that I started sketching my own version of foreskin llama.
     
    • Good Question Good Question x 2
    • List
  5. slimelurker

    slimelurker
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2013
    Messages:
    1,331
    My God its head is so big, how does it not just flop all over the place, completely top-heavy? I'd have thought that with a head that large, its body would be tremendous, and would just hilariously continue to rise up out of the ground from nowhere. But nope. Instead we just get this absolute mess of anatomy.
     
  6. Malachi

    Malachi
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    May 22, 2015
    Messages:
    1,039
    Occupation:
    Programming for giggles
    Why did she shoot it in the side instead of the kneecaps like she did with the others? Those shots brought them down REAL fucking quick
     
    • Good Question Good Question x 1
    • List
  7. Maria M

    Maria M
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Apr 12, 2014
    Messages:
    1,062
    I feel like making a redraw of this fucking thing... You want mutated goats, Ill give you mutated goats.
     
  8. Wanklin Dick

    Wanklin Dick
    Expand Collapse
    Has Macrophilia

    Joined:
    Mar 7, 2015
    Messages:
    1,135
    Occupation:
    Slowly Declining
    The dialogue needs a Hemingway style edit. It includes way too much that is shown or can be shown.
     
  9. jerk

    jerk
    Expand Collapse
    has no title

    Joined:
    Sep 29, 2014
    Messages:
    2,079
    I'd actually be interested in other people's versions of these if anyone's up for it.
    I drew my version of them just a few hours ago but I ended up getting more concerned about how their bodies would work and so forth to actually develop the design further.

    I'm not that skilled nor experienced with creature designs so far (I've experimented mainly with humanoid species' designs and otherwise only helped friends + random people with fixing their creature designs to make them more "logical"/fitting to their world's lore).
    So I didn't add anything, just modified them - actually goat-like anatomy, still with long legs, and turned the exposed part of skull into some hybrid of goat and crocodile (for the length) skull. Gave them overgrown hooves (and horns for males), like goats can actually have them but with these I'd make it common and exaggerated - some mutation accelerating their growth way more so that it can become significantly problematic or even lethal.
    I'm trying to figure how to make the loose skin actually work (if I can even do that) and what sort of teeth would work for them - sharp, uneven molars similar to crocodile teeth would look interesting imo but they'd need to be modified a lot since herbivores need to chew their food. Front teeth will just be like they're with goats. And since they don't have cheeks or lips and so forth, that would affect their behavior and possibly the way they vocalize.
    JJ has established the world and lore poorly so I might be overly strict due to lack of info.

    I might be over doing this but I actually enjoy working on species, creatures and designs in this way.
     
  10. Maria M

    Maria M
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Apr 12, 2014
    Messages:
    1,062
    I got rid of the goat idea for now. Its obvious hes going for llamas or alpacas for the look stupid llama. stupid llama.
     
    • Quality Shoop Quality Shoop x 2
    • List
  11. slimelurker

    slimelurker
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2013
    Messages:
    1,331
    Here's my own rough take on a mutated demon goat. Wanted to keep it simple.
    demon goat suggestion.
     
    • Quality Shoop Quality Shoop x 2
    • List
  12. Dinkbot

    Dinkbot
    Expand Collapse
    Pornograführer

    Joined:
    Feb 1, 2012
    Messages:
    4,269
    Ignoring the shit about the design since there's not much else to say, the last two panels bug me because you see her shooting from one angle going right, then the perspective changes. They could have flipped the image or drawn it from the rear of the 'goat' to have the bullets on the left side. I just think it messes with the flow and looks weird
     
  13. Halfbreed

    Halfbreed
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Hero

    Joined:
    May 19, 2015
    Messages:
    750
    It looks like a Wendigo that went too far on the whole bestial transformation gig and never regained human shape.
     
  14. slimelurker

    slimelurker
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2013
    Messages:
    1,331
    [​IMG]
    Why would you not shoot at its legs or neck or head? Isn't she their captain? What kind of ninny hunter fires two shots and then stops and panics when that doesn't immediately bring the animal down?
     
    • Shots Fired Shots Fired x 1
    • List
  15. Maria M

    Maria M
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Apr 12, 2014
    Messages:
    1,062
    Cuz Dramaz.We needs dem.

    And also, why didnt he put a scene that shows some distance between the fighters and they retarded goats? Ive been assuming that they were at least in the same vicinity and would know that demon goat was coming...

    Ugh I give up on this comic.
     
    #2395 Maria M, Feb 18, 2017
    Last edited: Feb 18, 2017
  16. Ricki

    Ricki
    Expand Collapse
    Girlvinyl

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2013
    Messages:
    2,644
    The first panel is stiff as fuck. Going by the dialog the alpha goat thing is charging at them, but it looks like it's just pointing. The fourth panel is even derpier. That large ass goat looks less like a scary demon goat thing and more of a cute chihuahua.
     
  17. Malachi

    Malachi
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    May 22, 2015
    Messages:
    1,039
    Occupation:
    Programming for giggles
    Why dont they have some kind of comms system like radios? Seems pretty useful when you're in this big desolate area.

    And don't tell me they don't have the technology when they have fucking airships n shit
     
    • I Agree I Agree x 2
    • Good Question Good Question x 1
    • List
  18. jerk

    jerk
    Expand Collapse
    has no title

    Joined:
    Sep 29, 2014
    Messages:
    2,079
    IMG_20170218_232649.
    NYOOM
     
    • Like Like x 2
    • Quality Shoop Quality Shoop x 1
    • I Fapped I Fapped x 1
    • List
  19. Dinkbot

    Dinkbot
    Expand Collapse
    Pornograführer

    Joined:
    Feb 1, 2012
    Messages:
    4,269
    [​IMG]
     
    • Quality Shoop Quality Shoop x 3
    • Like Like x 1
    • I Fapped I Fapped x 1
    • List
  20. Maria M

    Maria M
    Expand Collapse
    EDF Elite

    Joined:
    Apr 12, 2014
    Messages:
    1,062
    Ill call it the horny giraffe.
     
: pedo thread, homsarSumo is a closeted pedo brony, lol you fags actually like this comic, stop pretending to hate it, HEY GUYS LOOK AT THIS NEW PAGE, IT'S SO TOTALLY BAD, BUT I CAN'T HELP WONDERING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT, IT'S NOT LIKE I KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT THE CHARACTERS, shut the fuck up Sir Wulfington, you worthless autist, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, u so mad, you know what was a good show?, Dirty Pair, never again has a show about two sexy ladies, blowing shit up, been so entertaining, no, I edited the tags, homsarsumo is a stupid baby, everybody claim they edited the tags, maybe he'll block everyone and hellban himself, homarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homarsumo is a butthurt faggot, homarsumo is a closet brony, homarsumo is an autistic ponyfag, homarsumo wants johnjoseco's cock, homarsumo jerks it to pony rape, homarsumo is a nigger, homarsumo can't stop sucking cocks, homarsumo fails at hiding butthurt, homarsumo talks to himself, homarsumo has a pony sex toy, homarsumo confirmed for buttravaged, Lol homosarsumo deleted my tags, you liar you never even added any, HOMOSARSUMO EATS PONY COCK DAILY, Homosar disliked my comment ;(, homarsumo bled profusely, homsarsumo deletes tags out of butthurt, homarsumo cries like a little bitch, homarsumo drinks beer out of koala anuses, homarsumo drinks gasoline out of beercans, homsarsumo is a closeted pedo brony, homsarsumo has a vagina, don't worry, I have all the tags saved, they're never going away, I KNOW YOUR IP ADDRESS, AND I LOVE CHESS, SO DON'T YOU MESS, oh look they're back, We are all Joseco fan tards, Cuz we call homsar a homo, Logic how the fuck that work, homarsumo is jewish, homarsumo loves jews, homosarsumo was molested by joseco, only faggots use the dislike button, Only turbofaggots care about being called in tags, HI HOMSARHOMO!, HOMOSAR IS A FUCKING JEW, Hi mommy I'm on the tags, sirwulfington is a furfag, serious analysis of a gay fetish comic, homosar deletes tags out of butthurt, homosar has a tiny chode, homosar is a fucking jew, homosar is a self-hating jew, homosar secretely faps to this, homosar please enjoy, homosar sucks ragawars dick, nobody cares, homsar faps to ragawar, homsar is johnjoseco's biggest fan, homsar is quite the faggot, homsar pls stop shitposting, homsarhomo buttsex parade, homsarhomo is massively butthurt, homsarhomo has a roundabout in his anus, homosaur commissioned Jay Naylor, homosar thinks antisemitism is cool 'n edgy, homosar's penis is a fat chode, homosar disliked my comment ;(, homosar eats johnjoseco's shit, homosar is a fucking jeew, homosar is so mad about sexy animu girls, he's shaking his fist, up and down, and up and down, and then stopping for 15 minutes, and then starting again, homosar has a giant folder of dickgirl porn, Homosar got shagged by AIDS poz shemale, and he liked it., homosar cucked himself, with his other hand, Homsar pls stop shitposting, homsarsumo is in love with a jew, star-crossed lovers, torn between love and hate, homsarhomo loves kosher pen0r, homsarhomo is pro-deviantart, breaking news, Homarsumo is still a faggot, wulfington's new avatar is gay, no homosar you can't delete the tags again, lol he tried blanking them yet again

Share This Page